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Ben's avatar

Wow! So powerful

Edward Jones's avatar

This was just awesome.Panic sets in for a moment in time.But of course safe words.

D.F. Blair's avatar

Thank you so much!!!

frank (*)'s avatar

Why did I find myself hoping you'd find a tactful way to complete the branding he clearly deserved?

Perhaps he could've been given a choice of a new safe-word.. either "brand" or "banned".

Two sides of a permanent coin.

D.F. Blair's avatar

I’ll get there eventually. But I wouldn’t want such a profound moment of permanence to merely be context for a mindfuck. When these characters do a branding scene it will be about informed, enthusiastic consent! :) thanks for your awesome comment!